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Brian Miller
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Joined: 28 July 2004
Location: United States
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Posted: 21 August 2019 at 8:20am | IP Logged | 1 post reply

Look at that POV in the second panel!! Wowzers!
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Jim Petersman
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Joined: 26 June 2012
Location: United States
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Posted: 21 August 2019 at 8:21am | IP Logged | 2 post reply

Ah! Methinks I know where this is going now and I love it! Wish I had access to the old FF issue to see if my theory works in that context. If I'm right - big if - I think parts of this may have been repurposed in a very altered form much later (now earlier) in JB's work. Of course the danger of being a John Byrne fan is that he knows how to misdirect and I end up with egg on my face half of the time. Ok, 75% of the time. Looking forward to seeing the story unfold!
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John Byrne

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Joined: 11 May 2005
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Posted: 21 August 2019 at 8:30am | IP Logged | 3 post reply

I appreciate Cyclops' revised visor, much truer to the original. Slimmer for Slim!

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Scott’s original visor is something a surprising number of artists have difficulty drawing. Dave seemed to be one, and I suspect that informed his decision to change it. (No criticism of Dave intended. When one draws pretty much everything else as well as he did, a bit of fudging here and there is completely excusable.)

If anyone is wondering, the trick to Cyclops’ original visor is to draw it as if it is actually embedded in his face and head.

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Dave Kopperman
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Posted: 21 August 2019 at 2:28pm | IP Logged | 4 post reply

I'll tell you one thing - the sheer amount of scanning involved in posting all these pages is exhausting just to think about.
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James Woodcock
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Joined: 21 September 2007
Location: United Kingdom
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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 12:14am | IP Logged | 5 post reply

I really like the darkened scenes in the bedroom. Nice effect to see in pencils
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John Byrne

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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 6:09am | IP Logged | 6 post reply

I really like the darkened scenes in the bedroom. Nice effect to see in pencils

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If that page was for regular publication, I would, of course, have left the darkening to the colorist. Here, in black and white, I felt something extra was needed, especially to make Willy's eyes suitably dramatic.

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Michael Penn
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Joined: 12 April 2006
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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 6:34am | IP Logged | 7 post reply

Eager to see where this is going...!





Edited by Michael Penn on 22 August 2019 at 6:59am
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Mark McKay
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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 6:39am | IP Logged | 8 post reply

This is so good! Was not expecting the story to take this turn.
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John Byrne

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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 7:33am | IP Logged | 9 post reply

I'll tell you one thing - the sheer amount of scanning involved in posting all these pages is exhausting just to think about.

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It's not so Olympian a task, really. Except for a few times when I fell behind, I have been scanning each page as it was completed.

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Peter Martin
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Joined: 17 March 2008
Location: Canada
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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 9:38am | IP Logged | 10 post reply

Beautiful art on the latest page. Love the shadows cast by Kitty's emergent fingers on the wall. Eerie effect!
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Rick Senger
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Joined: 16 April 2004
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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 11:00am | IP Logged | 11 post reply

Great stuff!  Creative, engaging, wonderfully illustrated.
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Nathan Greno
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Joined: 20 April 2006
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Posted: 22 August 2019 at 11:23am | IP Logged | 12 post reply

Well, I didn’t see that twist coming... 
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