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Vinny Valenti
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Claremont has skills that can definitely add to a story....it's just that ofttimes he adds *too much* of it!
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Wallace Sellars
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| Posted: 23 October 2020 at 9:12am | IP Logged | 2
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It seems as though CC may have pulled back a bit by the time he and JB reunited for TENTH CIRCLE. Am I remembering that correctly?
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John Byrne
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| Posted: 23 October 2020 at 9:14am | IP Logged | 3
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Didn’t read it.
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Brian Miller
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That actually surprises me a bit.
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John Byrne
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| Posted: 23 October 2020 at 9:59am | IP Logged | 5
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That was the deal. Mike Carlin wanted a Claremont/Byrne “reunion” so I suggested a plan I’d had before: I plot and pencil it, Chris scripts it, and I don’t have to look at it.
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Mark McKay
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Raj Dhami
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| Posted: 23 October 2020 at 2:54pm | IP Logged | 7
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Today's page......
Majestic in its depiction - art and words!
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Peter Martin
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Incredible use of light and shadow in today's page.
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Eric Ladd
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JB, was the design of page 15 always without panel borders? I had to pop back to page 14 to realize Vuk’s retelling started the same way. I’m curious about your design process for this page. It reminds me of that If I I Had A Time Machine commission from 2012.
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John Byrne
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JB, was the design of page 15 always without panel borders?•• There were panel borders when I did the layouts, so I'd know where to stop. When the drawing of the page was finished I erased them.
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Andrew Bitner
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Reading it now, I definitely feel "less is more" when it comes to the word salad packed onto that older page.
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John Byrne
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Excess verbiage—of which I have been guilty from time to time—has the effect of slowing. things. down. Which can be good, sometimes, but surely not in action scenes.
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