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Rebecca Jansen
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Joined: 12 February 2018
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 12:21pm | IP Logged | 1 post reply

I like the walking away panel as it reminded me of that splash of them together for the start of the unpublished #138! A sort of picking up where they left off.

Also, I thought the Guard leaving was particularly Legion-esque = flying in a tight stiff formation.

Edited by Rebecca Jansen on 29 January 2021 at 12:23pm
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Jim Petersman
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 12:31pm | IP Logged | 2 post reply

RM: "I must say, a lot of the criticisms and expressions of "confusion" that I've seen about Elsewhen seem to stem from people just not paying attention."
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I have my own theory that, at least some of this, goes back to the day-a-page format. For me at least, reading the entire issue in one go helps to cement some of the details in my mind. Back when I collected, I know I would reread most comics at least once, if not multiple times, before the next week's haul. I highly suggest going back and rereading the whole story at the end of the month. 
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John Byrne

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Joined: 11 May 2005
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 12:36pm | IP Logged | 3 post reply

I just love that last panel of Scott and Jean walking away through the trees! JB did you use a reference picture for that?

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Just looking out my Studio windows!

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Joe Smith
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 12:49pm | IP Logged | 4 post reply

Wow. What a great way to end the week. Love it. Every
bit of it.
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Scott Wegrzyn
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Joined: 20 May 2009
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 12:57pm | IP Logged | 5 post reply

Today’s pages made me smile from ear to ear - thanks!
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Tim O Neill
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Joined: 16 April 2004
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 1:16pm | IP Logged | 6 post reply



The last page is awesome! So funny! Based on the set-up, I thought you were
going to break our hearts with the hard luck team of all hard luck teams. And
instead we get the return of Marvel Universe John Byrne!

I would like to point out that Marvel Universe John Byrne died at the end of
SENSATIONAL SHE-HULK issue #50, showing that nobody stays dead in X-
MEN: ELSEWHEN!


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Rick Senger
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 1:47pm | IP Logged | 7 post reply

Hemingway: "The only kind of writing is re-writing." Capote: "Good writing is re-writing."

Kudos for finding a clever way of doing what you felt needed to be done.
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John Byrne

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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 1:49pm | IP Logged | 8 post reply

For those who are interested, I have begun editing the previously posted pages.

Not in chronological order.

And that's all i'm saying!!

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Darren Taylor
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 2:00pm | IP Logged | 9 post reply

Love the---is it an 'epilogue'? Whatever, the awesomeness with Colossus. Fabulous.
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Mark Haslett
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 2:18pm | IP Logged | 10 post reply

This issue was so much fun!

This is so much. Superheroes in misunderstandings and straight-forward knock-about and just plain fun is what I love in comics-- this feels so much more like a "real" series than I dreamed it could.

The "meta" page only makes this feel more real. It's like a Bullpen Bulletin.

This series is unforgettable. Thanks again and again!
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Brian Miller
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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 3:08pm | IP Logged | 11 post reply

For those who are interested, I have begun editing the previously
posted pages

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What made you decide to go this route with Peter’s leg rather than, say,
a simple “it got better” solution? And please don’t think this is a
criticism. I love it. Just curious, is all.
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John Byrne

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Posted: 29 January 2021 at 3:16pm | IP Logged | 12 post reply

I felt the subplot had dragged on too long for “I got better”.
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