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John Byrne

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Posted: 02 March 2019 at 2:15pm | IP Logged | 1 post reply

I hope you plan on scripting this, JB...

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Has there been some suggestion that I wouldn’t?

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Tim O Neill
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I wasn’t sure!  Since this was being planned for someone else to ink, I was thinking it might get someone else scripting as well.  I am very glad to know you will do it!



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John Byrne

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Technically, I suppose I could say, since this is all just a fun exercise for me to play with penciling again, that it wasn’t really “planned” for anyone to ink—not even me! And my dream scenario is still seeing it as an oversized Artists Edition shot from the pencils.
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Tim O Neill
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I think that would be ideal!  There is a depth to the pencils that I have been enjoying the hell out of with the sneak peeks, and it would be amazing to see the whole story this way


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Doug Centers
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Posted: 02 March 2019 at 2:41pm | IP Logged | 5 post reply

"And my dream scenario is still seeing it as an oversized Artists Edition shot from the pencils."

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Mr. Ryall, when can I reserve my copy?
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Eric Ladd
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I will jump on the bandwagon Doug Centers is steering.
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Wallace Sellars
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Posted: 02 March 2019 at 5:34pm | IP Logged | 7 post reply

Wow.

WOW!

No one can get me excited about comcs the way JB does!
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Steve Gumm
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Your Artists Edition senario would be ideal for me, that would be extremely cool... if that ever happens sign me up!
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Mike Baswell
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I'd be happy to put a down payment for that Artist's Edition right now just to reserve the hope of getting a copy!
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Peter Martin
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Suggestion meant as constructive feedback from a reader, not as a nitpick: 

The second panel's narrative caused my brain to leap in an incorrect way. I think this is because the 'the cry' refers back to the previous panel, but my eyes seeing it level with a speech balloon in the same panel made some kind of connection and then suddenly was confused as where the 'is heard' fits. Logically, the way you have laid it out all makes sense, but intuitively my brain got in a muddle.

I think if the 'across a devastated landscape' narrative block was joined with the next one it would solve this. Minor point and I know that what you are showing is not final, so feel free to ignore!

Struck again by how epic that planet in the first panel is. I can almost see the atmospheric layer.
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Brennan Voboril
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Posted: 02 March 2019 at 8:11pm | IP Logged | 11 post reply

"Technically, I suppose I could say, since this is all just a fun exercise for me to play with penciling again, that it wasn’t really 'planned' for anyone to ink—not even me! And my dream scenario is still seeing it as an oversized Artists Edition shot from the pencils."

VERY happy to hear this.  This falls into the category of one of those things none of us ever thought would happen, and if it does happen, and happen in an oversized AE shot from pencils, all I can say is wow - a dream come true.
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John Byrne

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Posted: 02 March 2019 at 8:13pm | IP Logged | 12 post reply

The second panel's narrative caused my brain to leap in an incorrect way. I think this is because the 'the cry' refers back to the previous panel, but my eyes seeing it level with a speech balloon in the same panel made some kind of connection and then suddenly was confused as where the 'is heard' fits. Logically, the way you have laid it out all makes sense, but intuitively my brain got in a muddle.

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Does not your intuition lead you from one block of copy to the next closest block in the panel?

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