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Paul Wills
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| Posted: 05 April 2024 at 2:29pm | IP Logged | 1
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MODOK!As only JB can draw him! Elsewhen p. 22
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Peter Martin
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| Posted: 05 April 2024 at 2:57pm | IP Logged | 2
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Another good page, Paul.
One little thing I'd point out is in the fourth panel, you've inked in a number of feint construction lines on the AIM stooge's drapery which don't really work (upper arm and knee).
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Paul Wills
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| Posted: 05 April 2024 at 4:15pm | IP Logged | 3
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Thanks Peter - I'm not afraid to try some things to see what works and what doesn't
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Peter Martin
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| Posted: 05 April 2024 at 6:59pm | IP Logged | 4
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Really nice work on Modok's craggy face.
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Athanasios Kollias
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I love your linework. And the result remains unmistakably JB.Well done.
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Paul Wills
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Thanks Peter- I was really trying to find a good balance of dark and light with that side of his face.Thanks Athanasios!
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Marc Thompson
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Edited by Marc Thompson on 09 April 2024 at 9:37pm
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Paul Wills
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Elsewhen p. 23 For a page that I thought would be one of the easiest to ink, this one was a bit of a challenge.
Edited by Paul Wills on 01 May 2024 at 2:53pm
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Paul Wills
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Elsewhen P. 24With this page I just thought, screw it- I'm going to play around with some textures and experiment and just have some fun.
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Steven Queen
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I love it Paul. I would suggest for the flora in the bottom panel to create some interesting shadow shapes to separate foreground, middle and background.
Here's an example in B&W by Al Williamson:
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Paul Wills
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| Posted: 07 May 2024 at 5:17pm | IP Logged | 11
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Thanks, Steven! That's the one area I was hung up on. I would darken foreground lines but still couldn't get that separation. I needed some shadows!Also thanks for the perfect reference image. I have to go back and give it another attempt. I'll post when done.
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Here 'tis. Last panel re-touched. I'm happier with it. Thanks again for that feedback!
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