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Eric Ladd
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Posted: 13 December 2019 at 10:05am | IP Logged | 1 post reply

Wow! Page 10 is amazing. The second panel is a lesson in perspective, big time! This issue has some great examples of how to maximize image impact for a reader.
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Sean Sinclair
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Posted: 13 December 2019 at 11:50am | IP Logged | 2 post reply

Jeffrey R. - I noticed the design of Scott's glasses, too -- I was just thinking it's a good idea to have those big, looping hooks holding them securely on his ears! I love some of the little details like that that present themselves throughout this story. 
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Richard Stevens
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Posted: 13 December 2019 at 12:42pm | IP Logged | 3 post reply

Seeing Scott react like this has the intensity of when someone threatens Sue Richards' family... I fear for anyone who might harm Jean.
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John Byrne

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Posted: 13 December 2019 at 12:51pm | IP Logged | 4 post reply

You should!
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David Schmidt
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Posted: 13 December 2019 at 5:05pm | IP Logged | 5 post reply

I fear for anyone who might harm Jean.

And Jean's more frightening than Scott...
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Michael Genitempo
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Posted: 13 December 2019 at 8:15pm | IP Logged | 6 post reply

Only if antagonized by some unruly ruffians perhaps... 
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Matt Clouser
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Posted: 13 December 2019 at 8:34pm | IP Logged | 7 post reply

On page 9, bottom panel, the line reads "Xavier wouldn't have taken her unless he though ..."  Should that be "thought" instead?
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Tim O Neill
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Posted: 14 December 2019 at 3:11pm | IP Logged | 8 post reply



As a fan of Cyclops, this story just keeps getting better and better. This series
is on fire - thank you for an amazing ride, JB!!



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Philippe Pinoli
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Posted: 14 December 2019 at 4:54pm | IP Logged | 9 post reply

Genius at work. Pure Magic is created from your
pens JB. These Scott's shots are....I can't find
any word
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Mike Baswell
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Posted: 14 December 2019 at 6:34pm | IP Logged | 10 post reply

To my mind, which I know matters not one iota in the grand scheme of things, I have a slight mental tic, for lack of a better term, every time I read Cyclops saying Xavier, because I just feel he would always refer to him as Professor or the Professor. Don't know why.
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Brian Miller
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John Byrne

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Posted: 16 December 2019 at 8:24am | IP Logged | 12 post reply

To my mind, which I know matters not one iota in the grand scheme of things, I have a slight mental tic, for lack of a better term, every time I read Cyclops saying Xavier, because I just feel he would always refer to him as Professor or the Professor. Don't know why.

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Perhaps for the same reason it used to bug me when Chris would have Jean call X "Charles". Seemed disrespectful, and a somewhat uncomfortable modification of their relationship. Of course, in context, it was really neither.

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