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John Byrne

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Joined: 11 May 2005
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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 8:03am | IP Logged | 1 post reply

It’s refreshing to see so many of you actually pleased to have been “kept guessing”. Over the years I got SO weary of letters—and then internet posts—from people who considered it a MISTAKE when the stories didn’t go as they expected!!
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Stephen Ben Pereira
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Joined: 23 August 2020
Location: Canada
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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 8:09am | IP Logged | 2 post reply

Amazing build up. Your a true master in story telling. 
Why can't Marvel see the light like you do JB?

Was that a alien paramedic moving in to put Scott on a stretcher ?
***My error that is the Silver Surfer

Looking forward to Monday :) 

Thank you for the extra page today :)


Edited by Stephen Ben Pereira on 26 August 2020 at 8:13am
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John Byrne

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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 8:23am | IP Logged | 3 post reply

Looking forward to Monday :)

•••

Somebody else tell him.................

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Richard Stevens
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Joined: 04 May 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 1969
Posted: 26 August 2020 at 8:30am | IP Logged | 4 post reply

I love the movement of the camera on this last page. We pull out from Scott and Jean, and suddenly everyone who loves them comes into frame... and then someone is behind *us*. 

But who??
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David Schmidt
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Joined: 11 July 2017
Location: France
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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 8:37am | IP Logged | 5 post reply

Monday 7th september Stephen. ;)


That ending left me speechless...

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Paul Wills
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Joined: 18 August 2018
Location: United States
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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 9:12am | IP Logged | 6 post reply

This format is so much more satisfying - slowing down the pace of the reader. Like the newspaper strips but on a grander scale!
Also, since you're conscious of no inker, your use of shadows and highlights are absolutely wonderful
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Shawn Kincade
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Joined: 29 April 2004
Posts: 112
Posted: 26 August 2020 at 9:16am | IP Logged | 7 post reply

Arrrrrrrgh!  September 7!  Damn cruel calendar.

(How spoiled we are.  Used to be we would have to wait 30 days for new JB X-Men . . . then a few decades . . . and now a little over a week is unbearable.)

Great story, great last page, and the best last-panel cliffhanger I can think of in a long time.  I picture JB doing his best evil laugh as he typed "September 7" . . . 
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Peter Martin
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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 9:17am | IP Logged | 8 post reply

from people who considered it a MISTAKE when the stories didn’t go as they expected!!
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I think it helps when the pieces all add up in hindsight, as they do here. Once all the pieces are in place, the reader can see that everything makes sense. For example, Jean's top is left behind. We saw before when she got shot that the top she was wearing got holes, but she didn't. The clothes were separate -- normal clothes. So this is all satisfyingly consistent.
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John Byrne

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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 9:25am | IP Logged | 9 post reply

Consistency was rarely a consideration!
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Andrew Davey
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Joined: 27 April 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 1452
Posted: 26 August 2020 at 9:35am | IP Logged | 10 post reply

Argh! I

In the words of Mr. Petty, "..the waiting is the hardest part..."

Looking forward to the next installment. Excellent storytelling.
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Philippe Pinoli
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Joined: 03 September 2004
Location: France
Posts: 1331
Posted: 26 August 2020 at 10:03am | IP Logged | 11 post reply

Scott and JB have their dead of Jean terrible loss
iconic scene in Elsewhen too ! But in JB's true
story...Jean (stopping speculations) !
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Andrew Bitner
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Joined: 01 June 2004
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Posted: 26 August 2020 at 10:10am | IP Logged | 12 post reply

Hit me the way the "ashing" of Peter Parker did in AVENGERS: INFINITY WAR. Right in the feels.
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