Active Topics | Member List | Search | Help | Register | Login
Fan Fic MOBILE
Byrne Robotics | Fan Fic << Prev Page of 58 Next >>
Topic: X-MEN.ELSEWHEN 27--Comments Post Reply | Post New Topic
Author
Message
John Byrne

Grumpy Old Guy

Joined: 11 May 2005
Posts: 133563
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 6:22am | IP Logged | 1 post reply

…young Logan's speech sounds formal to us, but that's how people spoke back then.

••

I also wanted a subtle suggestion that, at that point in his life, he was not necessarily speaking English.

Back to Top profile | search
 
Andrew Bitner
Byrne Robotics Member


Joined: 01 June 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 7526
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 6:37am | IP Logged | 2 post reply

Nice! Logan is going to have a LOT to think about as these memories resurface...
Back to Top profile | search
 
Scott Barnett
Byrne Robotics Member


Joined: 14 December 2018
Location: United States
Posts: 264
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 6:54am | IP Logged | 3 post reply

Maaaan. I SO want to see Wolverine kill this @$$hole. 

JB, you have made me despise a character in the space of two pages. Well done.
Back to Top profile | search
 
John Byrne

Grumpy Old Guy

Joined: 11 May 2005
Posts: 133563
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 7:06am | IP Logged | 4 post reply

Logan is going to have a LOT to think about as these memories resurface...

•••

Just to be clear, these memories are not coming into his mind as new or unfamiliar concepts. They are just like the memories you or I or anyone else has.

This is not, for him, a learning process. Altho there will be certain elements, as we go forward, some of you may find disturbing, even off-putting. Shaman has a big bombshell to drop at the end of this issue.

Back to Top profile | search
 
Tim O Neill
Byrne Robotics Security


Joined: 16 April 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 10942
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 7:32am | IP Logged | 5 post reply


I found that last scene of his mother being beaten to death disturbing, even
though it happened "off camera" - do you consider what is to come in this
issue an all-ages story?

Back to Top profile | search
 
John Byrne

Grumpy Old Guy

Joined: 11 May 2005
Posts: 133563
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 7:42am | IP Logged | 6 post reply

All-ages stories can have dark undercurrents. Consider most children’s fairy tales!
Back to Top profile | search
 
Tim O Neill
Byrne Robotics Security


Joined: 16 April 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 10942
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 7:54am | IP Logged | 7 post reply


I connected with Marvel characters more than most fiction when I was a kid, and stories dealing with trauma didn't faze me in a negative way. In retrospect, it probably did what good story writing always does - the real situations resonated, even though they were in a fantastical world.

I would say your story of Sue losing her baby in FANTASTIC FOUR is an excellent example of something that wasn't discussed a lot to kids as being handled in a skilled way.


Back to Top profile | search
 
John Byrne

Grumpy Old Guy

Joined: 11 May 2005
Posts: 133563
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 8:15am | IP Logged | 8 post reply

A recurring problem in the marketplace is the over abundance of fans who dismiss “all-ages” as meaning juvenile. But as you note those Lee/Kirby/Ditko early days were “all-ages”—something for everyone.

Compare the death of Logan’s mother to Uncle Ben, or across the street, the Waynes.

Back to Top profile | search
 
Jean Sterling Ajouissance
Byrne Robotics Member


Joined: 04 March 2021
Location: United States
Posts: 108
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 8:49am | IP Logged | 9 post reply

Damn.  His hyper-aggressive, hair trigger, mean tempered short fuse makes a hell of a lot more sense now.

And this is just the opening act of this onion peel.
Jeesh.

Empathizing.
Back to Top profile | search
 
Jean Sterling Ajouissance
Byrne Robotics Member


Joined: 04 March 2021
Location: United States
Posts: 108
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 8:54am | IP Logged | 10 post reply

Also, this sequence adds a touch more flavor to the whole Jahf-hit-him-with-a-snowball rage. Perhaps a subliminal trigger/muscle memory kind of effect.
Back to Top profile | search
 
John Byrne

Grumpy Old Guy

Joined: 11 May 2005
Posts: 133563
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 9:09am | IP Logged | 11 post reply

Incidentally, found this shot online.

A solid reminder of why I chose this guy as my "model" for Wolverine!!

Back to Top profile | search
 
Athanasios Kollias
Byrne Robotics Member


Joined: 27 September 2021
Location: Greece
Posts: 302
Posted: 15 October 2021 at 9:17am | IP Logged | 12 post reply

Wolverine as a kid looks very rough, and the "lack" of eyebrows somehow fits perfectly. Unless you will reveal it in the pages to come, may I ask how old he is supposed to be in these two pages?

Finally, the profile a the bottom of page 10 is pitch perfect. Am I right to "read" a shadow on his face or is this an artifact of the pencils/eraser?

Great job, JB. I am pleasantly surprised by how deep you decided to plunge with this origin tale! I think a Marvel story would have had at least one issue dedicated to the events leading to this scene, missing the whole point...
Back to Top profile | search
 

<< Prev Page of 58 Next >>
  Post Reply | Post New Topic |

Forum Jump

 Active Topics | Member List | Search | Help | Register | Login

You are currently viewing the MOBILE version of the site.
CLICK HERE TO VIEW THE FULL SITE