These are two attempts at a concept that is proving difficult. A Mr. Fantastic that is as much a monster as the Thing when he uses his power. Essentially his bones would be extremely hard and unpliable, his skin would be less stretchy than his ligaments and muscles leading to a strained look. Kind of getting it but it's not there yet. And for some reason I'm finding doing a Mr. Fantastic pose difficult.
I'd love to see some of these pages a bit larger, Mikael. I'm getting quite a
strong Alan Davis vibe from the pencils, and I'd really like to be able to make
out more of the detail.