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Glenn Brown
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Here's a second edit, pointing out various tangents and poor cropping
points. I realize that the characters are standing on the base
and we're looking up at them slightly, so that's why their feet are
obscured...but it still feels like they have been cut off at the
ankles. And the second arrow from Solar's body shows his body
angle going towards the right side of the picture plane, away from the
main thrust of the rest of the composition. edited to add: I
realize that overlapping of characters is perfectly acceptable within a
drawing. Some of the areas I pointed out showed points where it
appeared one character may have been touching another, or may be
standing upon another...even though they are not physically on the same
plane. That's why, IMO, either all of the characters have to be
on the same plane (even if some are on the ground and some are in the
sky; they still conform to the same ground plane and gravity), or
they're all posed figuratively in their own space without conforming to
a ground plane. To mix and match can create confusion. Hope
some of these suggestions/crits help.
Edited by Glenn Brown on 11 June 2005 at 1:22am
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Anthony J Lombardi
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| Posted: 11 June 2005 at 6:31am | IP Logged | 2
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Darren I'm flattered that you think my layout is so strong, but you shouldn't have removed yours I loved your layout.If it wasn't so good i wouldn't have been inspired to do mine. I hope you decide to place yours back up again.
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Darren Taylor
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| Posted: 11 June 2005 at 7:52am | IP Logged | 3
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Anthony J Lombardi wrote:
| Darren I'm flattered that you think my layout is so strong, but you shouldn't have removed yours I loved your layout.If it wasn't so good i wouldn't have been inspired to do mine. I hope you decide to place yours back up again. |
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Och, it was niggling me anyway dude. It was -just- the kick I needed to ditch it!
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Anthony J Lombardi
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| Posted: 11 June 2005 at 8:14am | IP Logged | 4
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Darren Taylor wrote:
Anthony J Lombardi wrote:
| Darren I'm flattered that you think my layout is so strong, but you shouldn't have removed yours I loved your layout.If it wasn't so good i wouldn't have been inspired to do mine. I hope you decide to place yours back up again. |
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Och, it was niggling me anyway dude. It was -just- the kick I needed to ditch it! |
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You're going to do another design I hope. I just love seeing your stuff,
Mac's, Vlad's,Glenn's everyones it makes me want to kick my stuff up to the next level. If you don't decide to post another version of your Bloodrayne. I'd love to see you ink the one i did.
Edited by Anthony J Lombardi on 11 June 2005 at 3:29pm
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Anthony J Lombardi
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| Posted: 12 June 2005 at 7:55am | IP Logged | 5
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Anthony castrillo wrote:
Darren- For now they want to see a tease. Just do a cheescake
shot. I'll get the cover specs if they agree on the details.
MAC
Check out the panel w/ the 3 doctors.
HA-HA
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Stan Lee, Peter Parker, is the third Jack Kirby?
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M.A. castrillo
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| Posted: 12 June 2005 at 8:40am | IP Logged | 6
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Stan Lee, Steve Dikto and Jack KIrby.
By the way, I'm back!!!
After days of being locked out, i had to re-register.
MAC
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M.A. castrillo
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Darren Taylor
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| Posted: 12 June 2005 at 9:14am | IP Logged | 8
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These were my suggestions...
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Darren Taylor
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Funny thing was, -if- we hadn't chosen "108" I thought a liscense plate with GNU556 (suddenly not sure if I got the numbers right!) on it might have been quite cool too;-)
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Darren Taylor
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| Posted: 12 June 2005 at 9:22am | IP Logged | 10
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Sasquatch!
Everyone bung up some Sasquatch sketches...you've only got today to do some qucikies...this -IS- a Sketchbook thread;-)
Here's one to start you off!
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Anthony J Lombardi
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| Posted: 12 June 2005 at 9:35am | IP Logged | 11
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I love the Sketch Darren.
If you get the time I'd love to see what you'd do with the rest of Alpha Flight especially Puck and James Hudson
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Darren Taylor
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| Posted: 12 June 2005 at 9:46am | IP Logged | 12
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Anthony J Lombardi wrote:
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I love the Sketch Darren.
If you get the time I'd love to see what you'd do with the rest of Alpha Flight especially Puck and James Hudson
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Thanks Anthony...one at a time though, plenty of time to get to those;-)
Meanwhile, too much "yacking" from you and not enough posting sketches!
Sasquatch! Hop to it dude, I'm now beating you, Two to nil;-)
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