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Darren Taylor
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 11:34am | IP Logged | 1 post reply

My vote would go for separate threads for each issue!

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Jason K Fulton
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 11:37am | IP Logged | 2 post reply

Has the format had any impact on how you're designing the pages, JB? Are there any double page spreads or splashes?
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John Byrne

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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 11:38am | IP Logged | 3 post reply

My vote would go for separate threads for each issue!

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Already my plan!

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John Byrne

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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 11:40am | IP Logged | 4 post reply

Has the format had any impact on how you're designing the pages, JB? Are there any double page spreads or splashes?

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There’s a double page spread close to the end of this issue. I’ve already figured a way to make it work.

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Rebecca Jansen
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 12:03pm | IP Logged | 5 post reply

I thought of something that's missing... only I don't miss it. Storm having a flashback about her childhood triggered by seeing jungle plants! I like the flow of this story a lot so far, a page turner with the characters fully focused on what's happening when it's happening. 

I wonder if that unused splash page for the discarded #138 that Tim O'Neill mentions might fit in somewhere along the way? It was a really nice scene. If not we can still imagine it took place somewhen between panels of this story.
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Drew Hart
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 5:38pm | IP Logged | 6 post reply

What I'm liking most is how "on model" all the characters feel to me. Professor Xavier seems his older scholarly self, Cyclops certainly looks like "Slim" Summers, Storm is practically regal, Colossus looks ridiculously powerful, Nightcrawler seems a bit "creepier," Wolverine is back to his compact self, and Kitty is every bit a gangly and awkward teenaged girl. Lilandra and the other Shi'ar even had that hint of "birdness" about them while still being humanoid-adjacent.

So many times these days character forms seem to be off an assembly line with only differences in heads, hair. You can get a feel for how these characters are mutants and why the X-Men are just different from the rest of the Marvel heroes who should be more assembly line-ish imo. These are the *outsiders* of the Marvel Universe and you can feel the differences in mutants vs. science experiments gone wrong or right as the case may be!
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Rick Senger
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 6:24pm | IP Logged | 7 post reply


In his first appearance MODOK was shown to be an ordinary guy who had been artificially mutated by AIM.
*****
Huh, forgot all about this.  Have to break out my old TOS... as I recall, Iron Man had an enjoyable battle with Titanium Man (fun Colan art) in the other story. 
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Shawn Kincade
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 7:00pm | IP Logged | 8 post reply

Reading ELSEWHEN so far is simply fun!

Great art, great story, great to see the characters I grew up with again.  The only downside is when I realized that JB has been entertaining me for (shudder) 42 years now.  
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John Byrne

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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 7:35pm | IP Logged | 9 post reply

SHADDAP!!!!
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Steve Adelson
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 8:38pm | IP Logged | 10 post reply

This is most engaging X-Men I've read in decades.  That's a spectacular MODOK, BTW.
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Rick Senger
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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 11:00pm | IP Logged | 11 post reply

I'm sure this is something I should know after having read comics for 45 years but what does the "75 degrees" written in the left margin on page 12 and the "60 degrees" on page 18 mean?
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John Byrne

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Posted: 17 June 2019 at 11:11pm | IP Logged | 12 post reply

Those are for any potential inker, describing the angle of the ellipses.
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