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Charles Valderrama
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 7:08am | IP Logged | 1 post reply

Count me as another who's fixated on the finer details of the last two pages... the car, the clothes, etc.

Logan stepping out of the truck is my favorite as well.

-C!
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Jason K Fulton
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 7:18am | IP Logged | 2 post reply

Makes sense that a child would respond to Peter that way - he's just spent time fighting off a group of metal men, and now another metal man shows up!
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John Byrne

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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 7:30am | IP Logged | 3 post reply

Y’know, I hadn’t thought of that! I was thinking he was startled by Peter’s transformation.

I like your version better, so I’m stealing it!!

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Andrew Hess
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 7:55am | IP Logged | 4 post reply

Love the latest page

The twisted undercarriage car shot reminded me of "Wheelie and the Chopper Bunch"..!
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John Byrne

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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 8:36am | IP Logged | 5 post reply

The twisted undercarriage car shot reminded me of "Wheelie and the Chopper Bunch"..!

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There was a certain... nostalgia to it!

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Steve Gumm
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 8:55am | IP Logged | 6 post reply

I think your series builds on the confidence that Colossus gained by beating Proteus. No hesitation, he seems to be always leading the charge into battle, it's nice to see. 
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Matt Hawes
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 9:34am | IP Logged | 7 post reply

Each page continues to give me something to marvel at, from the vehicle come to life, to the expressions on people's faces. 
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Mark Haslett
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 10:59am | IP Logged | 8 post reply

I feel like Kitty is so real again and I love her dressing western style for this
trip.

I also loved the predicament of her and the Professor being inside the
galloping car (which, of course, couldn't go on too long with her powers and
quick reflexes). I thought about "Wheelie and the Chopper Bunch" too, which
is just another level of richness here.

I hope I paid my JBF dues this month. It would kill me to miss a day of this!
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Nathan Greno
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 1:57pm | IP Logged | 9 post reply

JB: Y’know, I hadn’t thought of that! I was thinking he was startled by Peter’s transformation. 

I like your version better, so I’m stealing it!!

****

A bonus to not publishing these issues! You don’t have to call the printer and scream, “Stop the presses!” 

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Matthew Wilkie
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Joined: 09 March 2011
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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 3:08pm | IP Logged | 10 post reply

Y’know, I hadn’t thought of that! I was thinking he was startled by Peter’s transformation.

I like your version better, so I’m stealing it!! 

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Do you have a whole issue scripted before you start posting it on this forum, JB?

(Loving this issue BTW.)


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John Byrne

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Posted: 17 September 2019 at 3:22pm | IP Logged | 11 post reply

I’m scripted up thru issue 8.
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Eric Ladd
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Posted: 18 September 2019 at 6:45am | IP Logged | 12 post reply

Page 13, panel 3 is my new go to image anytime someone asks what a Sentinel looks like. That is an iconic image right down to the angle of the head tilt. Sentinels sure look cool as a pack of villians.
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