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Wallace Sellars
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Joined: 01 May 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 17415
Posted: 04 January 2022 at 10:15am | IP Logged | 1 post reply

JB, how do you know when to include a background and when to leave a panel open behind the characters? You do a great job at balancing that.
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Bob Brown
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Joined: 25 June 2021
Location: United Kingdom
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Posted: 04 January 2022 at 10:19am | IP Logged | 2 post reply

At the risk of being repetitive; loving today's page!

I know exactly what scene the third panel reminds me of, but the top two panels also have elements that seem familiar (stop the press - I've just worked out panel one as well!).

Panel 4 is so dynamic!! Very interested to see where this Phoenix thinks "home" is...
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John Byrne

Imaginary X-Man

Joined: 11 May 2005
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Posted: 04 January 2022 at 10:57am | IP Logged | 3 post reply

JB, how do you know when to include a background and when to leave a panel open behind the characters? You do a great job at balancing that.

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Mostly it comes down to how small the central figures are—how far back the “camera” is.

Not a hard and fast rule, of course!

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Joe Smith
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Joined: 29 August 2004
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Posted: 04 January 2022 at 11:08am | IP Logged | 4 post reply

Classic page!
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John Byrne

Imaginary X-Man

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Posted: 04 January 2022 at 1:10pm | IP Logged | 5 post reply

At the risk of being repetitive…

•••

I’ll allow it.

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Ted Pugliese
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Joined: 05 December 2005
Location: United States
Posts: 7966
Posted: 04 January 2022 at 1:59pm | IP Logged | 6 post reply

That six inches of snow we were supposed to get turned into
nearly two feet. Talk about thread drift...

BTW - Great page! Can't wait to see where we go with this!
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Michael Genitempo
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Joined: 04 July 2019
Location: United States
Posts: 427
Posted: 04 January 2022 at 4:12pm | IP Logged | 7 post reply

There aren't enough words to convey how pleased I am with these first two pages... and since I can't share my speculations... I won't comment on where this appears to be going... but I'm loving it so far...

I've really missed (before Elsewhen at least) seeing Jean in the original green Phoenix outfit (my favorite look for her small phoenix emblem and front seam and all per Cockrum). And with the more "open" hair: just wonderful!

Once again: thanks to John for all this freely shared fan-fic!
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Jeffrey Rice
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Joined: 10 September 2011
Location: United States
Posts: 1158
Posted: 05 January 2022 at 7:02am | IP Logged | 8 post reply

JB, you managed to make me feel bad for Pheonix, while still fearing what is next. Dang.
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Gary M. Peiffer
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Joined: 02 May 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 93
Posted: 05 January 2022 at 7:07am | IP Logged | 9 post reply

“Scottie”… Another out of the ballpark page!
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Wallace Sellars
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Joined: 01 May 2004
Location: United States
Posts: 17415
Posted: 05 January 2022 at 7:57am | IP Logged | 10 post reply

My internal guesswork finally seems to have gotten me another check in the "correct" column.

Unless (of course) I turn out to be wrong (again).

In any event, I'm diggin' where this is goin'!
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Andrew Bitner
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Joined: 01 June 2004
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Posts: 7160
Posted: 05 January 2022 at 8:39am | IP Logged | 11 post reply

I'll echo that I feel badly for what Phoenix must be feeling in that last panel. 
But it really makes me wonder what's going on here.
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John Byrne

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Joined: 11 May 2005
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Posted: 05 January 2022 at 8:46am | IP Logged | 12 post reply

… wonder what's going on here.

•••

My job here is done!

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