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Manuel Soler
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Joined: 05 February 2011
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 2:21am | IP Logged | 1 post reply
Great splash page to start the chapter! I hope in next pages we get Kitty and Kurt. They missed a great start but they had to leave space for the monster! 
The people that had been following the Elsewhen event from the start should already know who's the enemy!
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Larry Gil
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Joined: 09 November 2005
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 7:53am | IP Logged | 2 post reply
Stunning pages! Again , thank-you JB for this.
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Darren Taylor
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 8:05am | IP Logged | 3 post reply
The Faces are amazing! Individual, emotive and well constructed!

(PS. Art Thread is currently unlocked.)
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Michael Genitempo
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 8:18am | IP Logged | 4 post reply
Liking Storm's uniform being illuminated from her power.

Pencils really are getting tighter every issue -I mean look at Ororo's hands...
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Eric Ladd
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 8:21am | IP Logged | 5 post reply
The panel structure, camera angles and all the basic building blocks of a comic book are being pushed to a new level. It makes me wonder what he is laying down today, but that is months or a year away. A very nice page 2!
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Tim O Neill
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 8:29am | IP Logged | 6 post reply

Fastball special!!
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Tony Moretti
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 8:57am | IP Logged | 7 post reply
"Is your new visor calibrated properly?"
I can't help but pick up a slightly snarky inflection in Ororo's tone ;)
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Nathan Greno
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 9:00am | IP Logged | 8 post reply
The previous issues looked good — but the pencils seem even stronger here. I’m pretty blown away by these drawings. 
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Rick Senger
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 9:35am | IP Logged | 9 post reply
Feeling the magical sense of wonder and possibility of being 12 again and holding an all-new and all-amazing comic in my hands.
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John Byrne

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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 12:00pm | IP Logged | 10 post reply
I can't help but pick up a slightly snarky inflection in Ororo's tone ;)

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Can’t think why.

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Mark McKay
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 12:17pm | IP Logged | 11 post reply
The pencils are tight, while at the same time feeling looser than the previous issue, if that makes sense. They have a lot of energy to them.
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Peter Martin
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Posted: 06 August 2019 at 2:01pm | IP Logged | 12 post reply
The new visor line is presumably way of camouflaging exposition (Cyclops has changed his visor) within the dynamics of an action-oriented exchange of dialogue, which is a more interesting and far less clunky way than having a flat-out piece of exposition.

Interesting just how deep you've jumped into the story with this intro. Wolverine's words and Cyclops' reaction to those words give us some small clues as to the nature of the problem, but we still have no real idea what's going on yet!

Storm looks very graceful in that pose and the rendering of Colossus' arm is perfect! Fascinating to look at the coils of steel muscles in the forearm, the structure of the hands and the solidity you convey of the bracelet.

Looking forward to this story revealing its secrets.
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